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PRIDE OF THE SCOUTS CHAPTER ONE EXCERPT
I.
TURBULENT BEGINNINGS
From
the memoirs of
Sebastian
Delano Blayac
In
the year 1325 AE
“It’s
one piss poor excuse for a day,” Caleb said between striking a
match on his boot heel and lighting his pipe.
"Looks
that way, all right." I leaned against the railing of our
sluggishly moving skiff-tank, Pathfinder, and peered out at the storm
clouds looming above the jagged formation of rocks that passed for
hills in this desolate area.
The
sky was a somber gray, illuminated by occasional flashes of
lightning. Thunder echoed off the jagged rocks with blustering and
increasing regularity. A fine mist snaked through the valley and
hills like the sinuous form of some spectral dragon. It seldom rained
in this region, but when rain came, it was sudden, furious, and never
lasted long.
Shortly
after sunrise, the Pathfinder along with another skiff-tank, the
Reaper's Revenge, entered a section of Kofteros known as the Dagger
Hills. I had been on edge ever since we crossed the border. There was
something in the air other than the approaching storm. A sensation
that had caused the hairs to stand up on the nape of my neck and my
skin to break out in gooseflesh.
Caleb
noticed this (not much escaped his watchful eye) and he clapped me on
the arm.
“What’s
got you spooked, boy?”
“Do
you feel that?” I asked. “I've got this sensation. Like...I don’t
know. It’s hard to explain.”
Caleb
blew smoke through his nostrils and grinned. “Like some giant’s
foot is about to come down and stamp us into the dust, you mean?”
I
considered this and nodded. “Aye. Just like that. Do you feel it
too?”
“I
do,” Caleb said. “We’re being watched. And whoever’s doing
the watching doesn't have our best interest at heart.”
“Think
they’ll pick a fight?” I looked the hills over, but there wasn’t
a soul in sight. If the enemy was out there then they were well
hidden.
“So
what if they do?” Caleb said. “Relax. If something happens then
it happens. Worrying will only make it that much worse, believe me.”
I
gave another nod, this one less assured, and continued to watch the
jagged hills for any signs of movement. Kofteros sat in the far
western region of the Deadlands, far enough from the eastern empire
of Elysium and its surrounding provinces that most of its land
remained free of imperial control.
That
isn’t to say that our emperor, the wise and canny Arius Adrastus,
did not have his eye on the territory and its many resources, but in
those turbulent days, as we fought to expand the Great Walls of
Elysium farther into the surrounding Deadlands, a place as far
removed from the cradle of civilization as Kofteros barely warranted
a second glance.
Because
of this, many barbarian tribes called the place home. Their clans
were diverse and well-organized. Most had been forced into the region
by the empire's continued expansion, making them hostile towards both
the inner and outer territories. They would often raid neighboring
towns or passing caravans and retreat back across the border, knowing
that what scant authority existed in the area would think twice about
following.
That
the empire’s elite cavalry scout regiment would be sent to such a
wretched place was a sure sign that the already strained relationship
we had with the barbarian tribes had gone from bad to downright
unfriendly.
A
report had filtered in several days earlier pertaining to an
expedition led by one of the emperor's vassals, the famous explorer
Alton de Breilmaier. It appeared Breilmaier had encountered hostiles
while searching for a route through the Knochen Mountains, which
acted as a natural barrier between Kofteros and the Skala Sea to the
northwest.
Breilmaier
had hoped to open up trade with the island-folk said to exist just
off the coast. The wealth of exotic goods these sea-faring people
were rumored to harbor would easily fill Elysium's near depleted
coffers. Needless to say, things had not gone as planned. The scouts
were dispatched to search for survivors, if any were to be found.
We
were nearing the point where Breilmaier had sent his last frantic
transmission, stating that he was overwhelmed by Deadlanders and in
need of immediate assistance. From my position on the Pathfinder's
deck all appeared peaceful enough (or as peaceful as a group of
jagged hills can look, that is).
“Do
you think we'll find them?” I asked.
“Alive
or dead?” Caleb said.
“Either,
I suppose.”
“Hard
to say. We must stay optimistic, but the reality of the situation
doesn't bode well for anyone in that party.”
“And
if they're all dead?”
Caleb
puffed thoughtfully on his pipe. “Then we bury them and track down
their killers.”
“To
dispense justice?”
“Aye.
If it helps you sleep at night.”
I
glanced at Caleb, curious what he meant by that last remark. I knew
better than to ask him. Some things he would tell me, others he would
have me ferret out on my own. I had a feeling this was one of the
latter.
“The
barbarians are butchers,” I said. “They deserve what they get.”
“We're
infringing upon their lands. Tell me, what would you do if things
were the other way around?”
“The
emperor only wishes to unite the lands.”
“With
us on top.”
“What's
wrong with that? Someone has to be, right?”
Caleb
laughed. The wisdom of his forty-three years was evident in every
line of his long, weathered face. I had known the man my entire life.
Caleb and my father had served together in the military and fought in
many campaigns together, earning each others trust and respect.
“There
isn’t a man living I’d rather have watching my back,” my father
once told me. High praise indeed coming from Alexandro Blayac,
captain of the emperor's second legion and hero of the Boggarian
Wars.
It
was while Caleb and my father were off fighting in those very wars
that I was born in the kitchen of our stately cottage, delivered by
the cook and chambermaid. My mother, Lena, better known in polite
society as the Lady Andreea, named me Sebastian, after my
grandfather. I was the sixth of twelve siblings, and the third of
four boys.
My
family descended from a long line of heroes, whose exploits dated
back to the empire’s sanguineous beginnings. From Xenodoros Blayac,
who was instrumental in overthrowing Elysium's last king and paving
the way for imperial rule, to Kol Blayac, who braved the Sorrowing
Seas in search of pirates, our name carried with it a sense of pride
and duty.
We
had a responsibility to always be the first into battle and the last
to leave, either on our feet in victory or carried off on our shields
in defeat. It had always been this way, and the expectation was that
my brothers and I would carry on the tradition. Not that we needed
much prodding. Ours was a military family, after all. Service to the
empire was the greatest honor one could achieve.
This
was not to say that my father skimped on our education in favor of
military service. To the contrary, Alexandros spared no expense when
it came to his children's schooling. He understood that a well-honed
mind was the greatest weapon in a soldier's arsenal. You had to be
able to out-think your enemies on the battlefield, to predict their
every move, and outwit them at every turn.
I
had an insatiable hunger for knowledge from an early age. By my
tween-years I was so far ahead of my fellow students that my teachers
allowed me access to the archives between classes. I spent hours here
poring over the histories of the ancient world, much to their
approval. Most were convinced that once I had completed my mandatory
service in the military I would forgo a soldier's life for that of an
academic. How little they truly knew me.
I
was my father's son. I lusted for the glory of battle as he once did.
Never could I envision wasting away my days in some stuffy classroom
as my chances for honor and everlasting renown gradually faded with
the passage of time. So if it was true that I shined in my studies of
the spirit and of the mind, then I all but radiated in my physical
education.
Classes
were primarily taught by lamed or retired soldiers who took their
role of overseeing the next generation of soldiery with the utmost
seriousness. Their jobs were to keep us fit, teach us the art of war,
and see that we understood what was required of a vassal under the
standard of our glorious emperor.
I
graduated from the academy at the age of seventeen with top honors,
ready to serve and die for the empire. I was given the chance soon
after alongside my father and two eldest brothers, Joonas and Alaric,
at the disastrous Battle of Tarkat. This was the emperor's first
attempt at expanding the overpopulated empire farther into the
surrounding Deadlands.
As
anyone schooled in our rich history knows, Elysium did not always
encompass the vast territory it does today. When originally
constructed by the kings of old, the walls that enclosed the inner
kingdom were meant to contain only a limited population. However,
with the passing of several centuries and the transformation of the
kingdom into an empire it wasn’t long before overcrowding led to
disease, starvation, and death.
It
took the Great Plague of 1314, which wiped out nearly a third of the
population, to convince Emperor Adrastus that expansion was a
necessary action. This was by no means an easy task. It meant seizing
land currently occupied by other inhabitants. Some saw the writing on
the wall and surrendered without a fight. The majority, however,
wasn’t willing to go as quietly.
Tarkat
was a relatively small province in Voor, an eastern region close to
Elysium’s great walls. Barbarian tribes had been settling on the
land for generations, all but thumbing their noses at imperial rule.
Our armies lay siege to Tarkat in 1322, but we were ill prepared for
the resistance we faced. The Deadlanders were outnumbered two to one,
but they fought with a savage fury that was frightening to behold.
Many
of our troops, mostly young boys no older than myself, broke
formation and fled in every conceivable direction. The middle of our
great phalanx collapsed. The officers tried vainly to reform the
ranks. Most were slaughtered for their efforts, my father among them
with an arrow through the neck. Alaric joined him seconds later.
Joonas
and I made our stand along with the remnants of our army at what has
been christened 'Reaper's Rock' by historians. Our situation looked
helpless, but at that moment Caleb, who had been leading a separate
attack to the north, managed to reform a thousand men into a brigade
and attack the enemy from the rear.
Caleb's
first wave shelled the entangled mass of combatants from a distance
to soften them up for the impending attack. He was aware that he
would be hitting friend as well as foe, but under the circumstances
he had little choice. In the end, the opposition sounded the retreat,
Joonas was killed by mortar fire, and Caleb was given a medal.
It
wasn't long after that infamous battle that Caleb paid a visit to my
family, offering his condolences for our loss and to beg forgiveness
for his part in my brother's death. I thanked him for his kindness
and assured him that neither I or anyone in my family bore a grudge
against him for what had happened to Joonas. Caleb was a soldier
fulfilling his obligation to win the battle at all cost. Had he not
come to the rescue we all would have dined with the gods that day.
Caleb
took me under his wing, becoming both my teacher and close friend. I
learned that he once served as a member of the royal guard. He was
quite intelligent, and was often called upon as an adviser to the
emperor. I once asked him why he chose the life of a soldier when he
could have easily spent the remainder of his days in the palace,
content with his usefulness to the empire in any number of ways.
He
smiled that sad smile of his that somehow passed for amusement and
told me what I already suspected. He had an adventurous streak in him
that could not be fulfilled any other way. He, like myself, wanted to
explore, to carve new paths, to do something glorious with his life
before he lost it to that unrelenting bastard, death. It was a
sentiment I could easily understand.
Meanwhile,
The senate was alarmed at how dearly Tarkat had cost us right out of
the gate. An estimated twenty-eight thousand loyal subjects were
reported dead. Another thousand were missing in action. Most were
deserters who fled into the Deadlands during the battle, rightfully
afraid to return and face our emperor's wrath. The cost of vehicles
and equipment strained the already over-taxed plebs. Riots became a
common occurrence in the streets.
The
senate feared a full scale revolt if something wasn't done to quell
their rage. They pleaded with Emperor Adrastus to call off his
campaign, but he would have none of it. Instead, scapegoats were
culled from the ranks. Generals, advisers, and instructors all found
their necks under the executioner's ax. The emperor condemned his
army as weak and undisciplined, unworthy of their roles as guardians
of the empire.
That
is, with the exception of us few who stood our ground at Reaper's
Rock; we who fought and died to maintain a foothold into the
undiscovered country. We were basked in glory. The emperor honored us
further by announcing his plans to create an elite special operations
unit, beginning with those of us who had shown our true hearts at
Tarkat. The unit's primary duty would be to clear the Deadlands of
all who opposed the expansion of our glorious empire.
So
it was that the Cavalry Scouts were formed.
“...thinking
it over?”
“Pardon?”
I snapped from my daydreaming and shot Caleb an apologetic look.
“What
I said earlier about us and the Deadlanders,” Caleb went on. “About
what you would do if our roles were reversed. Have you thought any
more on it?”
I
sighed and said, “Is this another of your quizzes? Like the ethical
judgments of soldiers during war and the difference between duty and
revenge?”
Caleb
puffed on his pipe and smiled. “Something like that.”
“What
I don't understand is how you can defend these savages from a moral
standpoint but not even hesitate when it comes time to kill them.”
“I
do my duty as a soldier. It doesn't mean I can't sympathize with my
enemy's plight.”
I
looked over my shoulder to see if anyone was listening. “Careful
what you say. The wrong ears might hear.”
“Relax,”
Caleb said. “My loyalty is above suspicion. As is yours, so quit
avoiding the question.”
A
burst of thunder echoed through the hills. I closed my eyes,
relishing the cool breeze on my face as I considered Caleb's words.
At last I shook my head. “I don't know what you want me to say.”
“Maybe
I just want you not to lose sight of yourself.” Caleb blew a smoke
ring into the air. The ring stretched to the point of breaking and
then slowly dissipated as it drifted away. “You're a lot like your
father, Bas. He was a good man, but all too often he put his duties
above his own feelings. He did things that would come back to haunt
him later in life.”
“So
what,” I said, “you want me to put my personal feelings above my
responsibilities to the empire?”
“I
want you to think for yourself. Do your duty, but not at the cost of
a guilty conscience.”
I
laughed and clapped him on the back. “No worries, old man. My
conscience is clean.”
“Good,”
Caleb said humorlessly. “Enjoy it while you can.”
We
watched the approaching storm in silence. It was 1325, nearly three
years since Tarkat and the formation of the scouts. Before that
battle I was a wet-eared pup fresh from the academy looking to make a
name for himself. Now here Caleb and I were, well beyond the farthest
reaches of explored territory. We stood in full battledress, our
armor finely polished and gleaming despite the overcast day. Our
helmets and ordnance were stored in the armory below deck.
Elysium's
most renowned blacksmiths were tasked with creating the scouts'
armor. What they produced exceeded the expectations of even the most
enthusiastic among us. The armor was lightweight but
ballistic-resistant and covered our chests, shoulders, and outer
thighs. The remainder of our bodies were encased in aramid fiber
suits that would automatically inflate over wounds to stop bleeding
until medics could intervene.
Our
helmets were designed with a special telescopic visor that could
switch to infrared to better see in the dark. It also had a built in
comlink, allowing us to keep in contact with each other during
battle. This left our hands free to use any number of weapons built
specifically for the scouts.
Chief
among our arsenal was the battle-staff, a five foot metallic stave
with a curved blade on one end and a barrel built into the other,
which was capable of discharging twelve rounds of shot-shells. The
battle-staff tilted the odds in our favor in close-quarters combat.
We were trained mercilessly in the use of this weapon until we could
wield it with deadly accuracy.
The
.38 'Scourge' auto pistol was capable of firing forty rounds of
ammunition without reloading. This was due to an extra magazine built
into the pistol's grip. When one magazine emptied it automatically
switched to the back-up. This little feature was handy in a life or
death situation.
There
was also the usual assortment of weapons carried by all
soldiers—knives, grenades, back-up pistols, long-range rifles and
the like—but the most unusual device in our arsenal was the LHED
(Low-amperage High-voltage Electrical Discharge).
This
piece of hardware could fire a jolt of electricity capable of
stunning your prey for questioning, or, with the flick of a switch
from low to high, fry him to a crisp. The LHED was large and
cumbersome and took approximately sixty seconds to recharge after
firing, so the scouts seldom relied on it when in the field.
Our
cavalry cycles were made of lightweight armor along with a bullet
proof face shield and two mounted machine guns on either side of the
foot controls. Due to the Deadlands' rough terrain these wondrous
machines were constructed sans wheels. Instead, they could hover up
to five feet from the ground via an anti-gravity generator mounted
beneath the bikes. This allowed us to ride freely without the worry
of losing a wheel or becoming interred in anything from quicksand to
man-made traps.
The
cycles were quite expensive and meant to be used only for short
distances. They, along with their riders, were transported from
skirmish to skirmish within the protective hull of a skiff-tank.
These armored behemoths were operated by a captain and crew, and
served as a mobile barracks for the scouts during missions.
We
lived ten to a room in twenty double-bunk compartments to a tank. It
was cramped at best. To relieve the claustrophobia we often went
topside to mingle with the crew or take pot-shots at wildlife and the
occasional dust-dweller. This got so out of hand that the captain
would allow only a few of us on deck at a time. We began drawing lots
for the privilege and even getting into rows over it until our
commanding officers threatened to ban going topside all together if
we didn't shape up.
So
was the glorious and much romanticized life of a cavalry scout. Truth
is, we did see a lot of action in that first year, but as time drew
on the Deadlanders learned to both fear and avoid us. With the steady
decrease in opposition we were reduced to endless hours of sitting
wedged between our brother scouts in compartments lingering with the
smell of flatulence and body odor.
To
kill time we cleaned our weapons, wrote home to loved ones, played
endless games of Capture the Ace, pulled pranks on our superiors, and
jerked off (the last of which we did with great zeal at every given
opportunity). With egos swelling from past victories we were lulled
into a false sense of security. We were the emperor's elite. A force
to be reckoned with. The whole of the Deadlands cowered at our
approach.
In
other words, we grew soft. The Deadlanders did not. That they feared
us was true. That they went into hiding was also true. But it was not
to cower, but to wait—and to plan.
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SO WHY REVISE SCOUT'S HONOR?
The paperback edition of Scout's Honor, A Tale From The Deadlands is
currently in the works. Revised by yours truly with all new
illustrations by the super talented Dar Parsons. In regards to the revision, nothing major has been changed. The story is still 99% the story as originally published.
Keep in mind, though, that this was my first published book (meaning I was feeling self-conscious, intimidated and overwhelmed by this massive beast called publishing), and I was writing against a deadline. Because of this, the resulting material, in my opinion, is a bit stiff and awkward in places. But the biggest complaint I have received from readers is that, though they enjoyed the overall story, they had a hard time getting through the opening chapter.
Rereading the story, I immediately saw what the problem was. The first chapter is pure exposition. Instead of getting the story rolling right out of the gates I have the main character expounding for countless pages about who he is and where he comes from. Not exactly edge of your seat excitement, I know. Please forgive me. I was younger then. Time and experience have allowed me to see the light.
Now that I have a couple more books under my proverbial belt (meaning that, though that massive beast called Publishing still looms over me, I have learned to stave off its advances with the point of my well-sharpened pencil) I decided the time was right to go back and do a polish on the book that started it all.
The first chapter has now been integrated into the rest of the story, allowing it to flow more naturally. We begin with events already in motion; the characters are established and the action is set to take off. The back story is then divided up and peppered here and there throughout the first two chapters. Hopefully (can't express that word enough), this will allow the readers to ease more comfortably into the world of Sidoria and its many strange, indigenous lifeforms. I also took the opportunity to fix a few awkward word choices and stilted paragraphs.
The result is a story I am more comfortable with asking people to pay their hard earned money for. A fun, fast paced, action adventure story in the same vein as Robert E. Howard's Conan stories, or Edgar Rice Burroughs's Warlord of Mars series (not that I'm conceited enough to compare my fledgling writing abilities to these great wordsmiths of the fantasy genre, more that their great work is what I'm aspiring towards).
And if the story was getting a makeover then why not the illustrations too? As with the prose, the artwork was a rushed job to beat the curse of the ever present deadline. Dar Parsons's work on the Deadlands series has grown by leaps and bounds in just over a couple of books. Not to say what he had originally produced for Scout's Honor was substandard, he just knew he could do better. Now he's had a chance to prove it, and brother (or sister), let me tell you, he delivers big time.
So, that is my long-winded explanation for the revised edition of Scout's Honor, A Tale From The Deadlands. Think of it as a 'director's cut' if you will. The creators' preferred edition of their work. We're excited with the upcoming paperback (and ebook version) and hope you will be too. Thank you for your time and happy reading.
--Jeremy Lee Riley
Keep in mind, though, that this was my first published book (meaning I was feeling self-conscious, intimidated and overwhelmed by this massive beast called publishing), and I was writing against a deadline. Because of this, the resulting material, in my opinion, is a bit stiff and awkward in places. But the biggest complaint I have received from readers is that, though they enjoyed the overall story, they had a hard time getting through the opening chapter.
Rereading the story, I immediately saw what the problem was. The first chapter is pure exposition. Instead of getting the story rolling right out of the gates I have the main character expounding for countless pages about who he is and where he comes from. Not exactly edge of your seat excitement, I know. Please forgive me. I was younger then. Time and experience have allowed me to see the light.
Now that I have a couple more books under my proverbial belt (meaning that, though that massive beast called Publishing still looms over me, I have learned to stave off its advances with the point of my well-sharpened pencil) I decided the time was right to go back and do a polish on the book that started it all.
The first chapter has now been integrated into the rest of the story, allowing it to flow more naturally. We begin with events already in motion; the characters are established and the action is set to take off. The back story is then divided up and peppered here and there throughout the first two chapters. Hopefully (can't express that word enough), this will allow the readers to ease more comfortably into the world of Sidoria and its many strange, indigenous lifeforms. I also took the opportunity to fix a few awkward word choices and stilted paragraphs.
The result is a story I am more comfortable with asking people to pay their hard earned money for. A fun, fast paced, action adventure story in the same vein as Robert E. Howard's Conan stories, or Edgar Rice Burroughs's Warlord of Mars series (not that I'm conceited enough to compare my fledgling writing abilities to these great wordsmiths of the fantasy genre, more that their great work is what I'm aspiring towards).
And if the story was getting a makeover then why not the illustrations too? As with the prose, the artwork was a rushed job to beat the curse of the ever present deadline. Dar Parsons's work on the Deadlands series has grown by leaps and bounds in just over a couple of books. Not to say what he had originally produced for Scout's Honor was substandard, he just knew he could do better. Now he's had a chance to prove it, and brother (or sister), let me tell you, he delivers big time.
So, that is my long-winded explanation for the revised edition of Scout's Honor, A Tale From The Deadlands. Think of it as a 'director's cut' if you will. The creators' preferred edition of their work. We're excited with the upcoming paperback (and ebook version) and hope you will be too. Thank you for your time and happy reading.
--Jeremy Lee Riley
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Wednesday, April 16, 2014
THE SHEPHERD OF EVIL, A TALE FROM THE DEADLANDS
COMING SOON: The Shepherd of Evil. The latest novella in Jeremy Lee Riley's Deadlands Saga. Featuring stunning illustrations by Dar Parsons. Be sure to drop by this blog regularly for more updates. Or visit us on Facebook (https://www.facebook.com/pages/Wamingo-Publishing-LLP/243401875693420) and Twitter (https://twitter.com/WamingoP).
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Copyright, 2014. All rights reserved.
THE DARKNESS DREAD EXCERPT
ONE
The
sign out front of the antique shop read: PARANORMAL PARAPHERNALIA.
One
look through the bars that adorned the plate glass window and James
could see how the shop had acquired its name. The interior was
crammed full with a bizarre collection of knickknacks, baubles,
furniture, and clothing from around the world.
An
African tribal mask with baboon features hung on the wall next to a
disturbing painting of a three-armed Cyclops embracing a lamb. Below
it sat a chair made of what appeared to be human bones. A bust of the
Greek monster, Argus, stood beside it. Leaning against the bust was a
Tibetan ceremonial staff. A meticulously handwritten sign claimed the
staff belonged to a Buddhist monk who had spent half his life in the
mystical valley of Shangri-La.
James
wondered if anyone was gullible enough to fall for such drivel, but
considering the three-thousand dollar asking price he figured anyone
with pockets deep enough to purchase such an item was doing so more
for the story than the staff itself. It would make an excellent
conversation starter.
The
really expensive stuff was locked away in glass cabinets. Items such
as Celtic rings engraved with strange runes, a gemstone necklace said
to belong to the infamous witch Marie Balcoin, a handcrafted onyx
jewelry box from India, and (surprise, surprise) several shrunken
heads adorned the shelves alongside signs detailing each item's
history and asking price.
James
grinned despite himself. He had heard the store's owner, Paul Delroy,
was an eccentric individual, and a cursory glance was all the proof
he needed that those rumors were true.
He
checked the entrance and saw that the roll gate was down and locked.
The shop's hours were listed as nine to five Monday through Friday,
and noon to five on Saturday. It was a quarter after five now. When
Delroy had called him at the Wharton
Gazette and requested an
interview, he suggested that James meet him at his apartment above
the shop after closing time.
James
walked around the side of the brownstone and found a private entrance
to Delroy's residence half hidden between two tall bushes. There was
no doorbell, but a large knocker in the shape of a bat stared at him
with red glass eyes. James banged the knocker against the door. While
he waited he checked his briefcase one last time to make sure he
hadn’t forgotten anything.
He
had been hounding Delroy for weeks hoping for an interview with the
reclusive antique dealer. Delroy proved a hard man to reach. All
calls to his shop and residence went straight to voice mail, and
James had been so busy at the Gazette,
as well as finishing the first draft of his latest true crime novel,
that he hadn’t been able to pursue the man as efficiently as he
would like.
The
Gazette
was James' main source of income. He worked the City Desk with a
preference for the Crime Beat, especially where serial killers were
concerned. He was fascinated with them. He had even helped the
Federal Bureau of Investigation on a case a few years ago involving
the Crossroads Killer, a deranged drifter who left a trail of bodies
throughout the Midwest. The case had led to his first best seller,
Tracks of a Killer.
Since
his first book, James had published two additional titles. Neither
was as successful as the first, and that was putting it mildly. An
utter train wreck was closer to the truth. But things were about to
change for the better. He had a good feeling that his upcoming book
would put him back in the spotlight, because this time he wasn't just
writing about the serial killer, he was going to take an active role
in his capture.
How
was that for a twist? He could already see the cover blurb: Best
Selling Novelist James Raghnall brings a vicious killer to justice in
this riveting new masterpiece.
The critics and public would eat it up, he was sure of it.
The
killer in question had committed a string of murders right here in
James' hometown of Wharton, Indiana. Four bodies had been discovered
to date, all butchered in or around their homes, their remains
arranged in bizarre patterns that had so far stymied local
authorities. James thought it was some kind of cult at first, but the
arrangements of the bodies did not match any known cult practices.
Wharton's
sheriff, Chris Baylor, had determined that the murders were committed
by a single individual, someone with a penchant for knives or the
equivalent thereof. Some experts were theorizing a sickle. All the
victims had been hacked and slashed to death. There was no
strangulation, no smothering, no blunt force trauma. Whoever this
person was, he liked it up close and messy.
James
checked his mini-recorder to make sure the tape was wound to the
start. He then placed it in the breast pocket of his blazer and
flipped through a yellow folder containing photos of the murder
scenes along with several newspaper articles featuring headlines like
‘Massacre on Forsyth Street’ and ‘The Wharton Goblin Strikes
Again.’
He had coined the
moniker ‘Wharton Goblin’ in one of his articles about the
murders. The name stuck and soon all the papers from Maine to Florida
were using the Wharton Goblin when describing the killer. This was
much to the sheriff’s chagrin. The last thing he wanted was a
public spectacle, the exact opposite of James, who saw these murders
as the perfect opportunity to rekindle his flagging writing career.
James placed the folder back into the
briefcase and banged the bat-shaped knocker again. He began to wonder
if anyone was home. Delroy's message was as cryptic as it was
unexpected. He had left it on James' voice mail while James was
arguing with his boss about one of his stories being passed over in
favor of some fluff piece on the latest teenage fashion.
Delroy's
voice was refined and sophisticated, his pronunciation of every word
slow and deliberate. The message was short and to the point: “Mister
Raghnall, I understand you wish to speak with me in regards to the
Wharton Goblin case. I may have information you can use. Come by my
home after five. I trust you know where I live. Good day.”
James
had every intention of keeping the appointment. Not because he
thought Delroy possessed information on the Wharton Goblin. More to
the fact, he suspected Delroy was
the Wharton Goblin.
He
had no real proof outside of a writer's intuition. Delroy simply fit
the psychological profile of a serial killer. He had no wife or
children to speak of, few if any friends, and those who knew him
described him as a real odd duck; the kind of person who kept to
himself and only interacted with others when it was deemed necessary
to do so.
Delroy's
IQ was said to be well over a 160. One of those genius prodigies who
coasted through college and could have easily snagged any high-paying
job in the country. Hell, in the world.
This
begged the question of why such an individual was wasting his time
running an antique shop in bumfuck, Indiana. The red flags were so
obvious that James was surprised Sheriff Baylor and his button-down
brigade hadn't noticed them too, but Delroy wasn't even on the
department's suspect list.
James
came close to sharing his observations with the sheriff, but
reconsidered at the last minute. Why share the glory when he could
take it all for himself? Here was a chance to do something totally
unique. He could make himself the hero in his own story.
Not
that he was going into this blind, deaf and dumb. There was an
outside chance he was wrong about the antique dealer. Being a recluse
and a weirdo doesn’t automatically make one a serial killer. Still,
if he was right—and every instinct screamed that he was—then he
felt it prudent to bring along a little protection.
James
caressed the .22 pistol in his hip pocket. Its presence gave him the
confidence to see this mad scheme through to the end. He knocked
again, but there was still no answer. This was getting ridiculous.
James pulled his blazer tight against himself to ward off the chill
in the late October air and looked up at the second story window.
He
could see the faint glow of a light inside…and the silhouette of a
figure staring down at him.
The
hair stood up on the nape of James' neck. He stepped back for a
clearer look, but the figure was gone. Had someone been watching him
or had he imagined it? Just for the hell of it he tried the doorknob.
Anything was better than standing here in the cold, waiting for
someone who may or may not be home to answer. The knob twisted in his
grasp and the door creaked open.
James
was surprised. Delroy locked his store up tighter than a drum, but
left the door to his residence unlocked? Of course, it could have
been left open specifically for him. His arrival was expected, after
all.
He
peeked inside and saw a narrow hallway to the right of the foyer and
a staircase to the left. Macabre music drifted down from the second
floor. It sounded like Franz Liszt's ‘Hungarian Rhapsody No. 2’.
How
utterly proper.
“Hello?”
James called. There was no answer. He called again with the same
result. Maybe the music was drowning him out? That would explain why
Delroy hadn’t answered the door.
Decision
time. Should he enter or try back some other time? The answer was
obvious enough. Delroy had invited him, hadn't he? And who knew when
he would get another chance to speak with the man. There was a story
here, and reporters went where the story led them, plain and simple.
Here
goes nothing, James thought.
And
on the heels of that: No, not
nothing. Here goes everything.
He
stepped through the door and shut it behind him.
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Saturday, April 12, 2014
THE CREATURE OF THE BARADOONS EXCERPT
An excerpt from The Creature of the Baradoons. Written by Jeremy Lee Riley, with illustrations by Dar Parsons.
I. RAVEN’S
END
As
Recorded in the Journal
of
Dr. Demetre Jaeger
in
the year 1361 AE
The
dying man was discovered by a group of farmers and brought to my
office here in the town of Raven’s End.
I
had just finished my final appointment and was about to close the
office for an hour so that I might slip over to Roseby's Saloon for a
couple of drinks. It had been a relatively slow day consisting of a
sprained ankle, a minor cooking burn, and a fractured arm from
falling off a ladder. Nothing that would throw the town into turmoil
should their only doctor decide to drown his boredom in a schooner of
ale and a slice of Momma Roseby's mishmash pie.
I
was fishing through my pockets for the keys to the front door when it
crashed open, missing my face by mere inches. The farmers hurried in,
a half-dozen at least, and all sharing the same panicked expression.
In their arms was a writhing, screaming man drenched in blood.
My
first thought was that one of the farmers had fallen into the
combine. It wouldn't be the first time such a tragedy had occurred.
But I quickly recovered my senses and noted that the injuries
appeared to be the result of a vicious attack, most likely from a
wild animal.
The
farmers were all speaking at once, some nearly shouting in order to
be heard over the man’s screams. Their foreman, a broad-shouldered
giant named Huy, quieted them with a curt bark and then quickly
explained to me what had happened.
"We
was working the fields near the foothills. Séamus saw him first. He
was staggering along, barely able to walk. Looked like he'd come down
outta the mountains, but—"
"Never
mind that right now," I said. "Just get him on the table
and hold him." I
rummaged through the cabinets for my supplies while Huy and the
others heaved the man onto the operating table. They wrestled with
his flailing limbs, keeping him still long enough for me to
administer a sedative. Once it took effect and the man had quieted I
asked Huy to finish his story.
"He
was screaming something 'bout his village. Don’t know what he
meant, he wasn’t making much sense. We did what we could to stop
the bleeding but, gods, there's just…” Huy shot a queasy glance
at the man on the table. “There's so much blood."
I
ushered the farmers out the door with instructions to fetch the town
magistrate at once. I knew he’d want to see this. Once alone I
washed my hands and then removed the patient's clothing for a better
look at his wounds.
My
initial assumption appeared correct. The man had been mauled by some
sort of animal. He had suffered lacerations and punctures to his
head, neck, left shoulder, torso and left thigh. The wounds looked to
have been made by a carnivore with a jaw measuring around a foot
in width and a foot-and-a-half in length. The fact that he could
have sustained such injuries and still be drawing breath, no matter
how increasingly shallow, was truly remarkable.
The
man was shivering uncontrollably. With the amount of blood he had
lost he must have been freezing from the inside out. I needed to
restore his blood volume, increase the hemoglobin levels. But with
the primitive equipment at my disposal there wasn’t much I could
do. I didn’t even have a means of determining his blood type.
Perhaps if I was home behind the protective walls of Elysium I could
save him, but out here in these wastes his chances were next to nil.
The
man groaned and muttered something under his breath. Gently, I leaned
in close and asked what sort of animal had done this to him. His
shivering became more violent, his breathing more erratic. He let out
a high-pitched wail and clawed at my shirt with a trembling hand. I
took his hand in both of mine and told him that everything was going
to be okay. The most important thing for him to do right now was to
rest and regain his strength. The man responded with a
heart-wrenching sob.
I
let go of his hand and turned to see town magistrate Whelan Daumier
standing in the doorway. He was a tall, bearded man with a robust
frame and a mane of graying blonde hair that hung shy of his broad
shoulders. His faded blue eyes peered at me from the leathery folds
of his sunburned face.
Whelan
had been the magistrate of Raven’s End for going on twenty years.
He and I had been friends for most of that time. He was one of the
few decent people I’d met out in these wastes. Honorable to a fault
and dead serious about his profession, he did not play favorites when
it came to upholding the law in his town. I had learned that the hard
way when he once locked me up for public intoxication.
Whelan
nodded to me and had himself a look at the patient. “Heard the
farmers found him wandering through the fields,” he said. “Heard
he was losing blood by the bucket loads. How’s he still alive?”
“He
barely is,” I replied. “Frankly, I’ll be surprised if he
survives the night.”
The
man let out another moan. Whelan cleared his throat and shot me a
sidelong glance. “Can he...can he hear us?”
“I
doubt it. He’s pretty far gone. I wouldn’t be surprised if he—”
“CREATURE!”
The man jerked his head forward, screaming in our direction. “IT
CAME IN THE NIGHT! IT KILLED 'EM ALL! CREATURE! CAME IN THE NIGHT!
EVERYONE’S….dead.”
The
man’s voice cracked on the last word. Having used up the last of
his strength he laid his head back on the table, let out a shuddering
sob, and grew still. I checked for a pulse.
“Is
he…?” Whelan began.
“Aye,”
I said.
“What
was he going on about?”
I
was silent for a moment as I pieced the story together in my mind.
The picture that began to form was less than encouraging. “The
farmers said he came from the mountains. There’s a small village up
there, as I’m sure you know.”
“Wait,”
Whelan said, “are you saying that whatever did this to this man
also attacked the Taivan Village?”
The
village in question was a tiny community established in the Baradoons
by the Taivi mountain dwellers over a century ago. They stopped in
town from time to time to trade goods and stock up on provisions. The
general lot tended to be clannish and secretive, interacting with the
townspeople only when necessary. This had not won them many friends
with the locals.
I
retrieved a sheet from the closet and draped it over the body. “You
heard his final words, the same as I. ‘Everyone’s dead’. What
else could it mean?”
Whelan’s
face paled. “Gods, Demetre, I’ve kin up there.”
“I
know,” I said. “Let’s pray it was an overstatement on this poor
fellow’s part. He was hardly in a rational frame of mind.”
“Maybe
so, but something chewed him up and spat him back out. Crazy or not,
he went through an awful lot to warn us.”
I
shook my head. “Let’s say some kind of creature did attack the
village. There’s no way it could wipe out everyone. The villagers
have weapons, they have the numbers. There’s just no way.”
Whelan
looked a little relieved. “Maybe you’re right. But why didn’t
more people show up here? My son, he would’ve brought his family to
town first thing.”
The
thought had crossed my mind as well. Whelan’s son, Gerald, had
married Abelia, daughter of Ahren, the village’s chieftain. By law
Abelia was not permitted to leave her mountain home, so Gerald became
a member of the clan. They had a daughter, Branda, two years ago.
Gerald had a good head on his shoulders. If trouble had befallen the
village he would’ve been the first to get his family out.
“Maybe
he was afraid to make the long journey here with his daughter in
tow,” I said. “Those mountains can be treacherous, even to an
experienced climber.”
Whelan
ran his fingers through his beard, lost in thought. At last, he said,
“This guy’s gotta be full of it. There’s no way one animal
could wipe out an entire village.”
“The
man did say it attacked in the night, right?”
Whelan’s
brow furrowed. “I think so. What about it?”
“Well,
the villagers would’ve been asleep for the most part. They would’ve
been caught off guard. The village isn’t that big. There’s what,
forty-five…fifty people up there? They would’ve been disoriented,
disorganized. Easy prey.”
“Are
you saying they were eaten?”
“Maybe.
Whatever did this to this man is enormous. Didn’t you see the size
of his wounds?” I pulled back the sheet to allow Whelan another
look at the dead man’s ravaged body. “Naturally, it didn’t eat
everyone at once. Maybe it simply killed them and is saving the
others for later. You know it’s rather cold up in the mountains
this time of year, so the bodies would be well preserved for—”
“Enough!”
Whelan slapped a box of bandages off the counter and stepped to the
open door for some air. “Gods, my family may be dead and here you
are talking about them like they’re a frozen supper.”
I
mentally kicked myself for my insensitivity. “I could be wrong,”
I said. “I am just theorizing, after all. I mean, the only way we
can be certain is if we go up there and see for ourselves.”
Whelan
didn’t answer for some time. He leaned against the door frame,
staring out at the mountains that towered over the town like a
giant's hand reaching for the heavens. The Baradoons rose along the
northern border of Eulimi, separating the region from neighboring
Nabron. It was one of the largest mountain ranges in the known world.
Its five peaks, Tos, Nambre, Haelia, Vair, and L'Deia, varied in
height, with its tallest, Nambre, around nine-thousand meters high.
The
Baradoons were shrouded in mystery, and was the stuff of legends even
during the Age of Kings. It was once believed that the mountains were
home to the sky god, Valdueis, who watched over all from his great
throne high atop Nambre's summit.
Raven's
End was founded by miners near the southeastern base of L'Deia half a
century ago. The iron ore they extracted from the rock was lucrative
enough to attract other prospectors, and with them came the usual
assortment of boomtown followers, including families, merchants,
saloon owners, whores, religious fanatics, and broken men looking for
a fresh start.
The
town flourished, becoming one of the richest in the Deadlands. This
was due in part to adventurers and explorers who came from all over
to brave the Baradoons' treacherous terrain and attempt to chart its
many nooks and crannies, pouring much of their wealth into the town’s
economy in the meantime.
The
mountains have never been mapped entirely. Unpredictable weather,
treacherous terrain and unexpected mishaps were to blame for that.
Explorers have died, been injured, disappeared, or just given up and
returned home in frustration.
Many
have told stories of strange occurrences in the dead of night; the
sound of footsteps outside their tents, accompanied by strange,
guttural sounds. Their pack animals have been found slaughtered and
their supplies strewn for miles up the mountainside. Some even claim
to have seen hairy beast-men watching them from far off distances.
I
have always taken such tall tales with the proverbial grain of salt.
Sounds in the night could be any manner of wildlife, from shadow cats
to wolves. As for the beast-men; if I had to guess, I would say they
were the product of mass hysteria brought on by altitude sickness or
the irrational need to believe in something that wasn't really there.
But
that was before Huy and his companions had brought the Taivi man into
my office. His death had created more questions than answers. Most
prominent among them was what sort of creature could have caused such
fatal injuries?
The
mountains were vast; any number of undiscovered species could have
flourished there, free of our interference. But the Taivi had lived
in these mountains for generations without any harm coming to them.
Could a whole village have truly fallen prey to this thing overnight?
Even
if that was possible, why the sudden attacks? Had the creature
entered their territory in search of food? Had the Taivi instigated
the attacks somehow? Or was the dead man on my table its only victim,
his ravings about a ravaged village the product of a traumatized
mind?
So
many questions. My overworked mind couldn’t settle on just one.
Whelan
drew a deep breath and let it out in a long sigh before turning to
face me. He was doing his best to remain calm, but concern for his
family was playing havoc on his nerves. "I'm going up there,"
he whispered. Once he had spoken the words out loud a sense of
urgency came over him. He grabbed my coat and shoved it into my hands
as he steered me towards the door. "It's my duty to go. I'll put
together an expedition and we'll see if this man's story is true or
not."
"And
if it is?" I asked.
Fire
danced in Whelan's eyes. "Then so help me I'll hunt this
creature into extinction!"
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